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Cpu apple 826 Posted 7 years ago
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Application for increment of salary

As you are aware of our increment which was forwarded recently to that I wanna have some issues. Sir as per your commitment and verbal communication about increment which was going to be 15% every year while making us recruit in your company to that we have decided to join but recently we found that there is no 15%increment after completing a year this company and also our colleagues who are working are getting more than 25000/month, so we are getting some doubts that we cannot see our future bright by working here .

  

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Your writing is rather discourteous. Are you sure you want to adopt this tone? "wanna" is street language, not business language.

  • Your writing is rather discourteous.
  • Are you sure you want to adopt this tone?
  • "wanna" is street language, not business language.
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Your writing is rather discourteous. Are you sure you want to adopt this tone?

"wanna" is street language, not business language.

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