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Silak12 Posted 7 years ago
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Application for bus service activation

Hi, everyone.

Could someone proofread this application. I would be much obliged.

The dean,

Riphah International University.

(Address)

Subject: Bus service fee payment method change.

Respected Sir,

It is stated that I am a student of second year (Department name).I am writing this to bring to your kind attention that I have been in a bike accident, which was my regular commute medium. Nowadays, I have to go on local bus and it is also quite unsafe. Therefore, I want to subscribe to the university bus service, but due to financial issues, I can't pay you the subscription charges in lump sum (i.e. semester wise). I would be very grateful if you would allow me to pay the charges of the bus service in monthly installments. Kindly facilitate me in this regard.

Yours obediently,

Sadia Minhas

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Perhaps this works. silak12 Hi, everyone. Could someone proofread this application.

  • Perhaps this works.
  • silak12 Hi, everyone.
  • Could someone proofread this application.
  • I would be much obliged.
  • The dean , Dean ______name___ or The Dean's Office Riphah International University .
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Perhaps this works.

silak12

Hi, everyone.

Could someone proofread this application. I would be much obliged.

The dean, Dean ______name___ or The Dean's Office

Riphah International University.

(Address)

Subject: Request for a

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