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Alemana Posted 11 years ago
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Hello to everyone,
could you please check the following paragraph for me?

"I am looking to develop a career that is not only focused on financial return but also on the creation of social return. As one of the leading XXX funds, XXX is appealing to me because it develops projects that foster social and ecological development."

Thank you very much
  

Top answer

“…that is focused not only on …” When using ‘not only on’, place it after the verb. Otherwise it is OK.

  • “…that is focused not only on …” When using ‘not only on’, place it after the verb.
  • Otherwise it is OK.
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“…that is focused not only on…” When using ‘not only on’, place it after the verb. Otherwise it is OK.
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Ok, thank you very much wilpeter!

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