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Alemana Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Application
Hello to everyone,
I am re-posting because I had some trouble with my last post. Please delete this one in case I created a double post now.
Could you please help me with the following two paragraphs? Is it understandable? Am I missing any punctuation?
Thank you so much in advance :-)
"XXX caught my attention due to both its international presence in XXX that matches my personal interest in this region and its focus on Microfinance, with the goal of improving life of the middle and lower class in developing countries."
"I would preferably like to work in a position where I could make use of my analytical skills by evaluating new investments and assess their social impact, and be also in contact with your investment partners."
I am re-posting because I had some trouble with my last post. Please delete this one in case I created a double post now.
Could you please help me with the following two paragraphs? Is it understandable? Am I missing any punctuation?
Thank you so much in advance :-)
"XXX caught my attention due to both its international presence in XXX that matches my personal interest in this region and its focus on Microfinance, with the goal of improving life of the middle and lower class in developing countries."
"I would preferably like to work in a position where I could make use of my analytical skills by evaluating new investments and assess their social impact, and be also in contact with your investment partners."
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*** caught my attention because of its international presence in ***, a region in which I have a personal interest, and its focus on microfinance, with the goal of improving middle and lower class life in developing countries. I would like a position in which I can use my analytical skills to evaluate new investments and assess their social impact, as well as maintain contact with your investment partners .
- *** caught my attention because of its international presence in ***, a region in which I have a personal interest, and its focus on microfinance, with the goal of improving middle and lower class life in developing countries.
- I would like a position in which I can use my analytical skills to evaluate new investments and assess their social impact, as well as maintain contact with your investment partners .
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*** caught my attention because of its international presence in ***, a region in which I have a personal interest, and its focus on microfinance, with the goal of improving middle and lower class life in developing countries.
I would like a position in which I can use my analytical skills to evaluate new investments and assess their social impact, as well as maintain contact wi
I would like a position in which I can use my analytical skills to evaluate new investments and assess their social impact, as well as maintain contact wi
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