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Alemana Posted 11 years ago
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Hello to everyone,
would someone be willing to check the following three sentences for me please?
“I would like to contribute to your company by driving the growth of your competitive position in the XX region as well as worldwide.”
“…to work in a high-learning environment” – Does this expression exist? I want to say that the work culture offers a lot of learning opportunities as trainings etc.
“Exploring different cultures and working on projects in various industries is especially attractive in the position as XXX.”
Thank you & have a nice day!
would someone be willing to check the following three sentences for me please?
“I would like to contribute to your company by driving the growth of your competitive position in the XX region as well as worldwide.”
“…to work in a high-learning environment” – Does this expression exist? I want to say that the work culture offers a lot of learning opportunities as trainings etc.
“Exploring different cultures and working on projects in various industries is especially attractive in the position as XXX.”
Thank you & have a nice day!
Top answer
#1 is OK. #2: I wish to work in an environment that offers plenty of learning, training and professional development opportunities. ”
- #1 is OK.
- #2: I wish to work in an environment that offers plenty of learning, training and professional development opportunities.
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#1 is OK.
#2:
I wish to work in an environment that offers plenty of learning, training and professional development opportunities.
#3
#2:
I wish to work in an environment that offers plenty of learning, training and professional development opportunities.
#3
Alemana“Exploring different cultures and working on projects in various industries is an especially attractivein the positionaspect of working as ***.”
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Thank you for your reply.
I am sorry to bother you again - but is it possible to substitute the double "working" with something else? The problem is that my next sentence also starts with "I enjoy working with..'.
I am sorry to bother you again - but is it possible to substitute the double "working" with something else? The problem is that my next sentence also starts with "I enjoy working with..'.
teechr“Exploring different cultures and working on projects in various industries is an especially attractive in the position aspect of working as ***.
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Exploring different cultures and working on projects in various industries is an especially attractive aspect of being a ***.
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