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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Hello to everyone, could you please help me with the following? Is it correct and understandable?
"The position would allow me to work independently on a project that will add a direct value to your organization, which is very appealing to me. It would further enable me to gain a broad overview of XYZ by working across your organization and engaging with your clients"
Thank you very much in advance!
"The position would allow me to work independently on a project that will add a direct value to your organization, which is very appealing to me. It would further enable me to gain a broad overview of XYZ by working across your organization and engaging with your clients"
Thank you very much in advance!
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It needs a bit of trimming: The position would allow me to work independently on a project that will add direct value to your organization and enable me to gain a broad overview of XYZ by working across your organization and engaging with your clients.
- It needs a bit of trimming: The position would allow me to work independently on a project that will add direct value to your organization and enable me to gain a broad overview of XYZ by working across your organization and engaging with your clients.
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It needs a bit of trimming:
The position would allow me to work independently on a project that will add direct value to your organization and enable me to gain a broad overview of XYZ by working across your organization and engaging with your clients.
The position would allow me to work independently on a project that will add direct value to your organization and enable me to gain a broad overview of XYZ by working across your organization and engaging with your clients.
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