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Kati83 Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Application

I´ve several possibilies for sentences in a letter of application, it would be great if you checked them for me.

"I think I´m suited for your school."

"If you think I might fit into your school..."

"If you think I´ll fit into your school..."
  

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Hi, I´ve several possibilies for sentences in a letter of application, it would be great if you checked them for me. " My first reaction is that all of these sound awkward and much too tentative. They suggest a lack of confidence.

— Clive

  • Hi, I´ve several possibilies for sentences in a letter of application, it would be great if you checked them for me.
  • " My first reaction is that all of these sound awkward and much too tentative.
  • They suggest a lack of confidence.
  • Can you provide some context?
  • What kind of application?
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Hi,

I´ve several possibilies for sentences in a letter of application, it would be great if you checked them for me.

"I think I´m suited for your school."

"If you think I might fit into your school..."

"If you think I´ll fit into your school..."


My first reaction is that all of these sound awkward and much too tentative. They suggest a lack of co
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Hi Clive,

it´s an application for an English Language School during summer vacation. The given sentences were written by pupils at a German grammar school. (As a task in an English exam, class 9).
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Hi,



I suppose that, at that age, they don't want to sound too forceful about such matters.



Clive
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ok, but are these sentences right referring to grammar? what would be a better sentence?

i´m confused Emotion: sad
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Hi,



The grammar is OK.

For #2 and #3, you haven't given the complete sentence.



Clive
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