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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Appeal Letter
is This A Good Letter So Far ?
Dear financial Aid committee,
I am writing this letter in hope that you will reconsider your decision and grand my Financial Aid. I would like to begin thanking you in advance for taking the time to read this letter and reconsider my request to reinstate my financial aid . I apologize for the lack of attention to my courses in the previous semesters of Spring 2014& Summer 1 2014 academic years, and I do not blame anyone but myself, however I would like to explain the circumstances..Regarding health issues and chaotic living conditions has effected me with my studies in school. At the start of the Summer 1 semester I was determined to have a successful semester, but a couple weeks later I developed A Inflammnated Respiratory Infection And Because It infected my breathing I was in and out the hospital through out different times I was in school To Get Test And Ex Ray Done . Because I Was In And Out the Hospital I Was Backed Up On Some Of My Assignments . After I Was Finally Getting Back on track in school I was put out of my mothers House and did not have a steady place to stay I also Did not have a laptop to do my work so once again I became backed up on my work at the time of me taking my summer 1 Reng 91 Course I Was A Work Study Student For The College The Money I Was Getting from the work study jobs was used to Pay for food and hotel rooms . When I Was At The College Working I Would Use The computers in the computer lab to complete my work but I had a problem with the black board for that course and turning in the work thru black board so I turned in everything via gmail which is one of the main reasons I feel like I earned the grade I did for tuning in the work incorrectly when I Tried to reach out to the professor to talk to her about using black board she sent me a link to black board but I still didn't understand how to use it after I explained it to her again she Told me to leave a contact number and She would contact me to let me know when I could come in so we could go over it she never called and when I Would attempt to talk to her at her office she wasn't There . during the time that I was in her class I became sick again From My Inflammnated Respitory Infection And I Was Nt Attending Work Or Doing My Class Assignaments when I Was out The Hospital I Informed My Professor Why My Work Was Late And Turned in my back up work she told me it was okay just send her. Copy Of my doctors note after
Dear financial Aid committee,
I am writing this letter in hope that you will reconsider your decision and grand my Financial Aid. I would like to begin thanking you in advance for taking the time to read this letter and reconsider my request to reinstate my financial aid . I apologize for the lack of attention to my courses in the previous semesters of Spring 2014& Summer 1 2014 academic years, and I do not blame anyone but myself, however I would like to explain the circumstances..Regarding health issues and chaotic living conditions has effected me with my studies in school. At the start of the Summer 1 semester I was determined to have a successful semester, but a couple weeks later I developed A Inflammnated Respiratory Infection And Because It infected my breathing I was in and out the hospital through out different times I was in school To Get Test And Ex Ray Done . Because I Was In And Out the Hospital I Was Backed Up On Some Of My Assignments . After I Was Finally Getting Back on track in school I was put out of my mothers House and did not have a steady place to stay I also Did not have a laptop to do my work so once again I became backed up on my work at the time of me taking my summer 1 Reng 91 Course I Was A Work Study Student For The College The Money I Was Getting from the work study jobs was used to Pay for food and hotel rooms . When I Was At The College Working I Would Use The computers in the computer lab to complete my work but I had a problem with the black board for that course and turning in the work thru black board so I turned in everything via gmail which is one of the main reasons I feel like I earned the grade I did for tuning in the work incorrectly when I Tried to reach out to the professor to talk to her about using black board she sent me a link to black board but I still didn't understand how to use it after I explained it to her again she Told me to leave a contact number and She would contact me to let me know when I could come in so we could go over it she never called and when I Would attempt to talk to her at her office she wasn't There . during the time that I was in her class I became sick again From My Inflammnated Respitory Infection And I Was Nt Attending Work Or Doing My Class Assignaments when I Was out The Hospital I Informed My Professor Why My Work Was Late And Turned in my back up work she told me it was okay just send her. Copy Of my doctors note after
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Anonymous is This A Good Letter So Far ? Your use of capital letters is really bizarre. The first letter in a sentence is capital.
- Anonymous is This A Good Letter So Far ?
- Your use of capital letters is really bizarre.
- The first letter in a sentence is capital.
- "I" is always capital.
- Then only proper nouns are capitalized.
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Anonymousis This A Good Letter So Far ?Your use of capital letters is really bizarre. The first letter in a sentence is capital. "I" is always capital. Then only proper nouns are capitalized. You make many mistakes using words. I highlighted these with yellow. Your letter rambles. You don't need to go into all the details about "Blackboard." You need to exp
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