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Sivadassd Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
appeal letter
Subject appeal letter
Respected Sir,
I am akther EMP # 1234 plumbing foreman working at desert camp I would like to bring your kind attention to the following few lines for sympathetic consideration.
I had a car accident at 5.30: am February 26th, I was driving on desert road from east to west toward AA farm. There is one lane on the desert road, the weather was very bad and the road was slippery.
Due to slippery road condition, the car lost traction and was about to hit the other vehicle on the very right lane. I turned the steering towards left to avoid collision. The car turned left but still under no traction hit the right hand side vehicle of the desert road
I am working in this company for the last 16 years and my salary is 1800 riyal as I am the only bread winner of my family and no any other source of income to find for me and my family which consists of seven persons
Now the company decided to deducted 8400 riyal from salary there for I am requesting
To the top management to minimize the above amount up to 3000 riyal which you can deduct from my monthly salary
I world therefore request you to please consider my request sympathetically, I would be very grateful to you for your kind attention and obliged
Respected Sir,
I am akther EMP # 1234 plumbing foreman working at desert camp I would like to bring your kind attention to the following few lines for sympathetic consideration.
I had a car accident at 5.30: am February 26th, I was driving on desert road from east to west toward AA farm. There is one lane on the desert road, the weather was very bad and the road was slippery.
Due to slippery road condition, the car lost traction and was about to hit the other vehicle on the very right lane. I turned the steering towards left to avoid collision. The car turned left but still under no traction hit the right hand side vehicle of the desert road
I am working in this company for the last 16 years and my salary is 1800 riyal as I am the only bread winner of my family and no any other source of income to find for me and my family which consists of seven persons
Now the company decided to deducted 8400 riyal from salary there for I am requesting
To the top management to minimize the above amount up to 3000 riyal which you can deduct from my monthly salary
I world therefore request you to please consider my request sympathetically, I would be very grateful to you for your kind attention and obliged
Top answer
I think that your letter is polite and mostly clear. ". I am sorry to hear of your misfortune.
- I think that your letter is polite and mostly clear.
- ".
- I am sorry to hear of your misfortune.
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I think that your letter is polite and mostly clear. The English is not perfect, of course, but I think it is fine to send it as it stands, except change "top management to minimize the above amount up to 3000 riyal which you can deduct ..." to " top management to reduce the above amount to 3000 riyal, which you can deduct ...". I am sorry to hear of your misfortune.
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