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Meimei MianDianRen Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Apology letter!

Dear all,

Could you please edit the following sentence. The person remind me that i made a mistake. So i would reply to apologize letter to him. now, I am trying to write a letter. Could you please edit or sholud I say to another way.

Thank you for your email. I am sorry that I put the wrong name to create Athens account. I have modified your account and sent your email with new username and password. So could you please check your email and if you have any trouble please do not hesitate to contact me.

thanks a lot
  

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It is mostly good.

The second sentence should be changed to "put the wrong name on your Athens account."or "entered the wrong name when I created your Athens account."

I hope this helps

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thank you so much for correcting my letter.
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meimei MianDianRenDear all,
Could you please edit the following sentence. The person remind me that i made a mistake. So i would reply to apologize letter to him. now, I am trying to write a letter. Could you please edit or sholud I say to another way.

Are these two sentences correct? If yes, what does it mean?
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Thank your for your email. I am very sorry that I 'used' the wrong name to create your Athens account. I have modified your account and enclose your new username and password. If you have any more trouble accessing your account, please do not hesitate to contact me again.
You should not send an separate email with the username and pasword. So, I deleted the fact that you 'sent an email' a
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