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apathy

0Jane feels apathy toward John's love. Her love is already given to Wilson who had gone to medical school with her. Their love is deeper as time goes by. John's hate grows more when she loves 00 so much. 02br
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0No. Try something like this:02br 02br 01i 00Jane01b 00 is apathetic02b 00 toward John's love. Her love is already given to Wilson01b 00,02b 00 who 01b 00went02b 00 to medical school with her.

— Mister Micawber

  • 0No.
  • Try something like this:02br 02br 01i 00Jane01b 00 is apathetic02b 00 toward John's love.
  • Her love is already given to Wilson01b 00,02b 00 who 01b 00went02b 00 to medical school with her.
  • Their love 01b 00is growing02b 00 deeper as time goes by.
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0No. Try something like this:02br
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01i00Jane01b00 is apathetic02b00 toward John's love. Her love is already given to Wilson01b00,02b00 who 01b00went02b00 to medical school with her. Their love 01b00is growing02b00 deeper as time goes by. John's hate 01b00grows
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0Thank you very much Mister Micawber, 02br
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00Questions:02br
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001) Can I say?02br
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00Jane feels apthetic. Jane feels in apathy.02br
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002) Why did you change 'had gone ' to 'went'?02br
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00Why did you change 'is' to 'is growing'?02br
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003) Can I say?02b
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01) Can I say?02br
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00Jane feels 01b00apathetic02b00.-- 01i00Yes02i02br
00Jane feels apathy.-- 01i00Yes, but rather stilted02i02br
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002) Why did you change 'had gone ' to 'went'?--01i00 there is no call for past perfect here02i02br
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