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Apart

"We have never been together infact the thing is we are always apart. There are many who legally entitled to miss you, who can just show of their intensity on how much you are being missed. Moreover the hard truth when you are even back from the tour its not me who is lucky and the one who is going to see you. We are going to stay apart forever like this, to say distance really should make no difference to me. But then too missing you awful a lot."

The above is a fragment of something which I am writing. Please help me on the above if it has been phrased properly grammatically.

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I have underlined problem areas: We have never been together infact the thing is we are always apart. There are many who lega lly entitled to miss you, who can just show of their intensity on how much you are being missed. Moreo ver th e hard tru th w hen you are even back from the to ur its not me who is lucky and the one who is going to see you.

  • I have underlined problem areas: We have never been together infact the thing is we are always apart.
  • There are many who lega lly entitled to miss you, who can just show of their intensity on how much you are being missed.
  • Moreo ver th e hard tru th w hen you are even back from the to ur its not me who is lucky and the one who is going to see you.
  • We are going to stay apart forever like t his, to say distance real ly should make no difference to me.
  • But then too missing you awful a lot
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I have underlined problem areas:

We have never been together infact the thing is we are always apart. There are many who legally entitled to miss you, who can just show of their intensity on how much you are being missed. Moreover the hard truth when you are even back from the tour its not me who is lucky and the one who is going t
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We have never been together infact the thing is we are always apart. There are many who legally entitled to miss you, who can just show of their intensity on how much you are being missed. Moreover the hard truth when you are even back from the tour its not me who is lucky and the one who is going to see you. We are going to stay apart forever like
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My suggestions:


We have never been together. Infact the thing is we are always apart. There are many who are legally entitled to miss you, who can just show their intensity how much you are being missed.

More over, the hard truth is when you are back from the tour, it's not me who is lucky and the one who is going to see you. We are going
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We have never been together. Infact the thing is we are always apart. There are many who are legally entitled to miss you, who can just show their intensity how much you are being missed.

More over, the hard truth is when you are back from the tour, it's not me who is lucky and the one who is going to see you. We are going to stay apart forever like this.
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OK now:

We have never been together. In fact the thing is that we are always apart. There are many who are legally entitled to miss you, who can just show how much you are being missed.

The hard truth is that when you are back from the tour, it's not me who is lucky and the one who is going to see you. We are going to stay apart forever like this.

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