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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Anything wrong with this sentence?

Hi may I know, is there anything wrong in this sentence? Or how could it be Improved? Thank you.

"I wish to update you that I had just decided to help a company in expanding their business in Asia, which we have been in discussion since Jan."
  

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"I wish to update you that I have just decided to help a company to expand their business in Asia . " ... help a company to expand their business in to Asia .

  • "I wish to update you that I have just decided to help a company to expand their business in Asia .
  • " ...
  • help a company to expand their business in to Asia .
  • (They are not doing business in Asia).
  • help a company to expand their Asian business .
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"I wish to update you that I have just decided to help a company to expand their business in Asia. We had been in discussion with them since January."

... help a company to expand their business into Asia. (They are not doing business in Asia).
... help a company to expand their Asian business. (They are doing bu
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Thank you. Noted your correction. ???

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