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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
Grammar
Anything I should change?
His chances of survival were very slim. They told him pretty early in the process.
Anything I should correct?
Top answer
No, that's OK.
- No, that's OK.
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anonymousHis chances of survival were very slim. They told him that pretty early in the process.
Anything I should correct?
I'd add "that". It connects the sentence to the previous one a little more smoothly.
CJ
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