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Chameleon Upadhyaya Posted 13 years ago
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Anyone suggest the following paragraph is correct or not before i publish it !

Black tea is generally stronger in flavor then the other less oxidized teas. While green tea loses its flavor within a year, black tea retains its flavor for several years. And although green tea has a decent market share because of its perceived health benefits, black tea still accounts for more than ninety percent of market sales globally
  

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Chameleon Upadhyaya Black tea is generally stronger in flavor th a n the other less oxidized teas. While green tea loses its flavor within a year, black tea retains its flavor for several years. And although green tea has a decent market share because of its perceived health benefits, black tea still accounts for more than ninety percent of market sales globally .

— CalifJim

  • Chameleon Upadhyaya Black tea is generally stronger in flavor th a n the other less oxidized teas.
  • While green tea loses its flavor within a year, black tea retains its flavor for several years.
  • And although green tea has a decent market share because of its perceived health benefits, black tea still accounts for more than ninety percent of market sales globally .
  • Nearly perfect.
  • I would write it as shown above.
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Chameleon Upadhyaya Black tea is generally stronger in flavor than the other less oxidized teas. While green tea loses its flavor within a year, black tea retains its flavor for several years. And although green tea has a decent market share because of its perceived health benefits, black tea still accounts for more than nine
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Thank you CJ ! i was bit confused with than" "then' and "the" !!
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