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My Comfort Place
Each one of us has the place which makes us recall the past gives good memories. Home is the place where the symbol of comfort and wellness. Everyone loves home. For these reasons, English poet has written:"Home, home, sweet home,There is no place like home." I encountered lots of decision over the years, but leaving home to study abroad has been the toughest decision of my life. Even so, I had to bite the bullet and left where the place I have been born and raised.
My home always bring upon great memories throughout my stay as an international student in Taiwan. Being an international student do suffer a lot from psychological sickness, and so when I feel helpless here I feel homesick and start to understand the meaning of the word “Home.” My home is very busy and rushes in the morning, but we are never forgetting to have our dinner together and it is useful to keep the joy of the family. Although my mom was literally the laziest cook ever. Everything was out of a can or bag and when it wasn't, it was thrown in the oven for hours when minutes would have done the job. We always complain about her food on the table but on the other hand, we will still finish all of it.
Home is the place where I live and keep my properties, have a rest, spend leisure, eat, drink, and watch TV. Everyone in my family comes back to home after a hard day, takes a bath, lies on the sofa and does whatever we want. At home, I feel comfortable and at ease. When I was a little girl, I always waited for my dad to come home in front of the door so I would be the first one to hug my dad. When Sunday comes, we spend day together in the sofa watching movie with pizza.
A home holds our family and cultural heritage, history of whole generations, reflects acceptance and limitless warmth. Being a form of love, it is associated with a tree which has deep roots. In this case the proverb “East or West home is best” is true according to my home, because my home is the best place for me in the world. Home is where the heart is, no matter where I go in the future, home will not feel like a goodbye to me.
Each one of us has the place which makes us recall the past gives good memories. Home is the place where the symbol of comfort and wellness. Everyone loves home. For these reasons, English poet has written:"Home, home, sweet home,There is no place like home." I encountered lots of decision over the years, but leaving home to study abroad has been the toughest decision of my life. Even so, I had to bite the bullet and left where the place I have been born and raised.
My home always bring upon great memories throughout my stay as an international student in Taiwan. Being an international student do suffer a lot from psychological sickness, and so when I feel helpless here I feel homesick and start to understand the meaning of the word “Home.” My home is very busy and rushes in the morning, but we are never forgetting to have our dinner together and it is useful to keep the joy of the family. Although my mom was literally the laziest cook ever. Everything was out of a can or bag and when it wasn't, it was thrown in the oven for hours when minutes would have done the job. We always complain about her food on the table but on the other hand, we will still finish all of it.
Home is the place where I live and keep my properties, have a rest, spend leisure, eat, drink, and watch TV. Everyone in my family comes back to home after a hard day, takes a bath, lies on the sofa and does whatever we want. At home, I feel comfortable and at ease. When I was a little girl, I always waited for my dad to come home in front of the door so I would be the first one to hug my dad. When Sunday comes, we spend day together in the sofa watching movie with pizza.
A home holds our family and cultural heritage, history of whole generations, reflects acceptance and limitless warmth. Being a form of love, it is associated with a tree which has deep roots. In this case the proverb “East or West home is best” is true according to my home, because my home is the best place for me in the world. Home is where the heart is, no matter where I go in the future, home will not feel like a goodbye to me.
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Elsie Ong My Comfort Place That title is not natural. I don't know what prompt you were given for that essay. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Each one of us has the We all have a place where we feel comfortable and place which makes us recall the sweet memories of the pas t.
- Elsie Ong My Comfort Place That title is not natural.
- I don't know what prompt you were given for that essay.
- ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Each one of us has the We all have a place where we feel comfortable and place which makes us recall the sweet memories of the pas t.
- gives good memories.
- Home is the place is that place where the symbol of we feel comfort and wellness.
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Elsie Ong My Comfort PlaceThat title is not natural. I don't know what prompt you were given for that essay.
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