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Keep a thoughtful mind

To enrich our knowledge , we try our best to learn everyday. Learn how to be a good man, how to think, how to deal with troubles, how to succeed. It occurs to me that an old man told me to keep a thoughtful mind all the time if I want to learn more and succeed.

As a college student, we should keep a thoughtful mind. Every day we are learning, but it seems that we don’t really make sense of what we have learned. We just know how much we have learned. Frequently, we just follow our teachers and professions’ views or steps. And sometimes we absolutely identify with what they say. Then we keep silent. As a result, sometimes we may lose our imagination, our thoughtful and original mind. Of course, our teachers may have had a point. But it is terrible if we remain to keep silent and do nothing. Why can’t we break silent? We trace the causes. Eventually we find it out. Because we don’t always keep a word in our mind, that is an “why”. When we listen to our teachers ,we are always too lazy to think deeply. In that case, we can’t bring about something new.

As far as I’m concerned, I think the most importance for us is to solve our problems immediately. We should have the courage to think in every measure, to have our own view points. If we have problems or we don’t understand the arguments, don’t be afraid to ask “why”. Try our best to solve and explain the difficult problems. Remember, a thorough thinking can make indefinite things fall into place.

In brief, keeping a thoughtful mind is crucial to learners, especially us. It is like vitamins in a way which help us become more healthy and stronger. Everyday we just add a question mark to an argument, and then we trace the causes and reasons. That will help us a lot. In order to learn more and enlarge our knowledge, we should keep a thoughtful and creative mind every moment. Maybe we can become smarter and smarter day by day. Of course, our novel view points also can capture the imagination of others.