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I_am_Qoo Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Anyone can help me to check my grammar ?

0Hi everyone , I try to improve my writing by write short paragraph .02br
00Thank you for anyone to check my grammar 02br
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00After searching for rescued the victim from land slide in mountain, the rescue team found unexpected victim in the cave on mountain.02br
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00" when I tried to search other victim on the mountain I found blind area that my team never search " the man from rescue team said02br
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00" when our team leaded dogs to that area , our dog barked and that meant we found something under mud "02br
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00After the dog barked , the rescue team heard faint voice from under feet they stand .02br
00they had dug that area and found a small tunnel that had the body laid on the floor .02br
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00" I knew he dies but not from suffocated or starved but " the rescuer closed his eyes and continueingly said 02br
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00" His skin was ripped off but no sign of blood soaked on the floor something on his body said with us his skin may ripped off while he was alive and when we tried to search tunnel we don't found other man or other something could done it "02br
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00he paused a second then said " that mean while he tried to call our team with groggy voice , his skin may had been ripped off or was being ripping off by something that We can't find " 02br
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00After the team found the corpse and searching for other victim completelym , The investigation team will cover that area and try to find another evidence that can answer question about The Death of the ripped off skin man "0-
  
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