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NoRa-UK Posted 17 years ago
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Anyone can correct this paragraph?

Hello



I hope you all doing well



I need someone to correct this paragraph?



its about obesity , what can be done ?



There is no doubt that the obesity is a serious problem in many countries and it has been increased dramatically in last decades .It is important to look at the causes as well as the solution and i will do that in this essay .
  

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It is important to look at the causes as well as the solution and i will do that in this essay There is no doubt that obesity is a serious problem in many countries and that it has increased dramatically in recent years. It is important to look at the causes as well as the solution, and this essay will do that. Best wshes, Clive

— Clive

  • It is important to look at the causes as well as the solution and i will do that in this essay There is no doubt that obesity is a serious problem in many countries and that it has increased dramatically in recent years.
  • It is important to look at the causes as well as the solution, and this essay will do that.
  • Best wshes, Clive
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Hi,



There is no doubt that the obesity is a serious problem in many countries and it has been increased dramatically in last decades .It is important to look at the causes as well as the solution and i will do that in this essay

There is no doubt that obesity is a serious problem in many countries and that it has increased dramatically in r
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Mary go to the cinema last night and see many movies. Her brother buy 2 combos and eat all and he do not give her nothing. When they arrive to the house she tell her what happen. And the mother punish him for not not give Mary some combo. Then her mother decide to not give more apportunities to go to the cinema
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