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Orientgirlz87 Posted 21 years ago
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Title : My Best Friend

I look around the place that my best friend and I always spend our time when we had a free time. My tear is coming through out my eyes. Really, I can not forget her smile, her kindness, her polite and everything about her.

I can still remember the date when we first met. It was on 16 January 2000. We were studied at the same school. Our relationship was started when she helped me in the computer lab. At that time, I was not really good in using the computer lab. Actually, that was my first time in touching the keyboard because before that, I really hated to use the computer when I had an assignment to do. She was prefered herself to help me. I really liked her when the first time I look her willingness and her patient in teach me how to use the computer.

Started from the time, I became closed with her. Although she and me not in the same classes at school, we were still met together after school to discuss our studies. We also went everywhere together if we had a free time. For exemple this place, we always filled our time at this place to share all our experience and fun stories that happened in that day. We talked and then we laughed together. If we had problems in our studies, we also met our teachers and went to library to find the references books.

But it was a year ago. Now, I can not met her again. I can not hear her laugh, her voice and all things about her. I lost my best friend in the accident that was happened to her a year ago. I cried when I knew she was incritical candition and my world was blanked when a doctor annouced that she was dead. For me, everything was changes when she was involved in the incident. Truly, I am really miss her and I will keep every sweet second with her, fresh in my memory. Forever and ever.
  

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Title : My Best Friend I keep looking around for all of those places where I and my best friend used to spend our free time. I cry when thinking about her. Really, I can’t forget her smile, her kindness, her politeness and everything she gave me to remember her by.

  • Title : My Best Friend I keep looking around for all of those places where I and my best friend used to spend our free time.
  • I cry when thinking about her.
  • Really, I can’t forget her smile, her kindness, her politeness and everything she gave me to remember her by.
  • I can still vividly remember the day when we first met.
  • It was on 16 January 2000 .
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Title : My Best Friend

I keep looking around for all of those places where I and my best friend used to spend our free time. I cry when thinking about her. Really, I can’t forget her smile, her kindness, her politeness and everything she gave me to remember her by.

I can still vividly remember the day when we first met. It was on 16 January
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