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The Play “Cinderella 2012” performed by English Major students of both Humanities and Education faculties has been completed successfully.This achievement has shown the devotion of students and teachers to this subject.
Both teachers of the Western languages department of Humanities and Education Faculties have joined to watch this play.
Everybody was impressed with their students. Namely, The audience's applause is worth for devoting their effort and patience to the play.The audience has never been disappointed with the yearly play of English Major Students.
One of the teachers who watched the play said " This show has the best light and sound system ever and The performance is also second to none comparing to other shows in the last seven years .Every teacher including Burapha Community are all waiting for the yearly play perfoming by English Major Students in every first semester of the year ''.
The Play “Cinderella 2012” performed by English Major students of both Humanities and Education faculties has been completed successfully.This achievement has shown the devotion of students and teachers to this subject.
Both teachers of the Western languages department of Humanities and Education Faculties have joined to watch this play.
Everybody was impressed with their students. Namely, The audience's applause is worth for devoting their effort and patience to the play.The audience has never been disappointed with the yearly play of English Major Students.
One of the teachers who watched the play said " This show has the best light and sound system ever and The performance is also second to none comparing to other shows in the last seven years .Every teacher including Burapha Community are all waiting for the yearly play perfoming by English Major Students in every first semester of the year ''.
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