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Thanhnam46 Posted 12 years ago
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Anybody help me check this paragraph plz?
I absolutely contradict the replacement of IT with other arts such as music, art and sports. The children, who learn arts and sports, have chance to receive a comprehensive education background. Sports help children strengthen body fitness after school stress. Music and art are considered as the mental medicine help them approach the rich spiritual world where their mind is free and build up their imagination.
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The children, who learn.... -> Children, who learn... Have chance -> Have a chance The mental medicine help them -> a mental medicine helps them I don't assure whether these corrections are right or not but I just think so.
- The children, who learn....
- -> Children, who learn...
- Have chance -> Have a chance The mental medicine help them -> a mental medicine helps them I don't assure whether these corrections are right or not but I just think so.
- Sorry if I was wrong
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The children, who learn.... -> Children, who learn...
Have chance -> Have a chance
The mental medicine help them -> a mental medicine helps them
I don't assure whether these corrections are right or not but I just think so. Sorry if I was wrong
Have chance -> Have a chance
The mental medicine help them -> a mental medicine helps them
I don't assure whether these corrections are right or not but I just think so. Sorry if I was wrong
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