Anybody, check my grammar.

Hi There,

I would like you help me checking the grammar of the following sentences. These sentences are part of a formal e-mail I'll sent to my project leader.
I'm Venezuelan and still learning English.

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Could I have the coordinates of the region we’ll be working with in order to take advantage I’m still here, in Caracas-Venezuela, in this way I could buy in the national cartography center of Venezuela the planes of the issue region. If you think I could run another errand here please let me know.
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Thanks in Advance,
Raul Vecchione