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Cami_III Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Anybody can check and give a opinion about my motivation letter?
Hi everyone I am a Spanish native speaker and want to apply for a Erasmus Mundus Master Course and this is my Motivation letter, please could you comment about the grammar and punctuation
Please!! this a important stage in my life and I would like to ace it!!
Let me introduce myself as a good candidate for the International Master in Rural Development academic period 2011-2013.
I graduated in Agricultural Engineering at the Universidad Nacional Agraria- Peru in 2009. As daughter of a single mother economically disadvantaged, my learning process sometimes became in an amazing struggle against poverty, sexism and the acceptance of a ordinary and passive life; but my mother's support and my self-motivation on change my reality, made possible completing my studies and let me graduated as one of the best students of my generation.
During my studies at university I not only acquired the skills and expertise of my professional profile but also added to my training: teaching and researching skills gained during my performance as Teaching assistant and Research assistant since 2005 to 2010. As a graduated and employee of Universidad Nacional Agraria I am aware of my university's need to ensure a generational change on its staff; hence it is compulsory encourage the high quality training of futures academics, in order to guarantee the excellent quality of our institution.
Taking part of this generational change is among my professional goals and aspirations, for this reason doing my post graduated studies in the IMRD and the quality that it provides not only means a direct benefit to my professional development but also will be a benefit to my country because I will become an agent of change by sharing knowledge and experience to future students. The cultural exchange and learning process that I would be subjected will provide me the necessary tools to support a correct developing of the teaching model in my university, contributing to the developing of Peru.
To cope with this enriching experience I am confident in skills as my leadership, perseverance and hard work, as well as my youth.
Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response
Please!! this a important stage in my life and I would like to ace it!!
Let me introduce myself as a good candidate for the International Master in Rural Development academic period 2011-2013.
I graduated in Agricultural Engineering at the Universidad Nacional Agraria- Peru in 2009. As daughter of a single mother economically disadvantaged, my learning process sometimes became in an amazing struggle against poverty, sexism and the acceptance of a ordinary and passive life; but my mother's support and my self-motivation on change my reality, made possible completing my studies and let me graduated as one of the best students of my generation.
During my studies at university I not only acquired the skills and expertise of my professional profile but also added to my training: teaching and researching skills gained during my performance as Teaching assistant and Research assistant since 2005 to 2010. As a graduated and employee of Universidad Nacional Agraria I am aware of my university's need to ensure a generational change on its staff; hence it is compulsory encourage the high quality training of futures academics, in order to guarantee the excellent quality of our institution.
Taking part of this generational change is among my professional goals and aspirations, for this reason doing my post graduated studies in the IMRD and the quality that it provides not only means a direct benefit to my professional development but also will be a benefit to my country because I will become an agent of change by sharing knowledge and experience to future students. The cultural exchange and learning process that I would be subjected will provide me the necessary tools to support a correct developing of the teaching model in my university, contributing to the developing of Peru.
To cope with this enriching experience I am confident in skills as my leadership, perseverance and hard work, as well as my youth.
Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response
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