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Hi lovely members



that my writing about copamer and contrast between Education lifestyle and work lifestyle

I need ur comment for my mistakes to learn.



Education and work are heart of the society which is built on them. These lifestyles are the core of fundamental values in making up a person. When I interviewed my sister we discussed the differences and similarities between her education at college lifestyle and her job in Head Asses Analyses lifestyle. Between these two types lifestyle there are many differences and similarities, so I am going to compare and contrast between them.



On one hand, there are a few similarities between her education lifestyle and her work lifestyle. One of which is, they both must deadlines. To explain further, she has to finish projects on time in her college and in her work. Moreover, she seems to think team work is positive in both cases that is to say. So she feel working together has benefits such as being more efficient and building relationship. In her job, she gets pressure with big projects for her company especially when her boss put difficult rules to finishing project. While in her studying, she got pressure end of semester to handout her projects, portfolio and do her examination.



On the other hand, the differences are more than the similarities. Firstly, she is more reasonability in her work because when she doesn't work well that will effect for other in work. While, if she responsible when she studied or not that will effect for herself. Before I asked her, I thought work environment make person more creative but that no truth. She was creative in her college more than her job because her teachers encouraged her to creating. On contrast in her work, her boss restrict her create for which he like it. Finally, the bond in the time that one is essential in work lifestyle which sometimes there is emergence position which need you be in work. On the opposite, education lifestyle has many options for student.





In the end, lifestyle at both venues has points in common but also some striking differences. Personally, I prefer education lifestyle because it's less stressful and good environment for creating.

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