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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Hi!
Are these two sentences well-worded? Would you make any changes?
The offer price for two persons – SEK 600. For extra SEK 60 you can complement your SPA adventure with a relaxing bath enriched with essential oils.
Much appreciated!
Are these two sentences well-worded? Would you make any changes?
The offer price for two persons – SEK 600. For extra SEK 60 you can complement your SPA adventure with a relaxing bath enriched with essential oils.
Much appreciated!
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Depending on the media over which this will be advertised, you might be advertising beyond Sweden. If so, you might want to consider comparing to a price in their currency. Otherwise, "Our current offered price for a couple is SEK 600.
- Depending on the media over which this will be advertised, you might be advertising beyond Sweden.
- If so, you might want to consider comparing to a price in their currency.
- Otherwise, "Our current offered price for a couple is SEK 600.
- "
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Depending on the media over which this will be advertised, you might be advertising beyond Sweden. If so, you might want to consider comparing to a price in their currency.
Otherwise, "Our current offered price for a couple is SEK 600. For an additional SEK 60, you can complement your SPA adventure with a relaxing bath, enriched with essential oils."
Otherwise, "Our current offered price for a couple is SEK 600. For an additional SEK 60, you can complement your SPA adventure with a relaxing bath, enriched with essential oils."
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