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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Any suggestions on how to structure this sentence so the "their" clearly refers to Sturm and Tasslehoff, not Goldmoon and Riverwind?

Goldmoon and Riverwind joined with Sturm, Tasslehoff, and their other companions (Tanis Half-Elven, the dwarf Flint Fireforge, and the twin brothers Caramon and Raistlin Majere) in fleeing Solace to avoid being captured by the soldiers.
  

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If your readers don' t know who's with whom by now, then you should just give up.

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  • If your readers don' t know who's with whom by now, then you should just give up.
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If your readers don' t know who's with whom by now, then you should just give up.
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Well that sentence is one of the intro ones where a lot of the characters are meeting so I would really appreciate some help with it.
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Trust your reader; leave it as it is.
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Okay thanks a lot for your help.
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