0
Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Any suggestions on how to reword my intro. Thanks

An outstanding educator possesses unique qualities that set him or her apart from others in the field. Ask any student about a favorite teacher and listen intently as he or she describes that person with a smile. The qualities of an outstanding educator are easily recognized by those whose lives they touch, shape, and change on a daily basis. It is in this writing piece that they will be described and discussed.
  

Top answer

Anonymous An outstanding educator possesses unique qualities that set him or her apart from others in the field. Ask any student about a favorite teacher and listen intently as he or she describes that person with a smile. The qualities of an outstanding educator are easily recognized by those whose lives they touch, shape, and change on a daily basis.

  • Anonymous An outstanding educator possesses unique qualities that set him or her apart from others in the field.
  • Ask any student about a favorite teacher and listen intently as he or she describes that person with a smile.
  • The qualities of an outstanding educator are easily recognized by those whose lives they touch, shape, and change on a daily basis.
  • It is in this writing piece that they will be described and discussed.
  • If you can avoid the cumbersome "he or her", do so.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
Anonymous An outstanding educator possesses unique qualities that set him or her apart from others in the field. Ask any student about a favorite teacher and listen intently as he or she describes that person with a smile. The qualities of an outstanding educator are easily recognized by those whose lives they touch, shape, and change on a daily basis. It is in this

Related Questions