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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Any punctuation and grammatical errors?

Also which one is grammatically correct?

The programmes which were first boardcasted last Saturday were as follows: Telver Nelso Rhythm Nation, Craig Charles House Party, Radio 2; Maya Jama, Radio 1 and Chris and Ciara, RTE Radio 1.

The programmes first boardcasted last Saturday were as follows: Telver Nelso Rhythm Nation, Craig Charles House Party, Radio 2; Maya Jama, Radio 1 and Chris and Ciara, RTE Radio 1.

  

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mosja boardcasted 1. broadcasted 2. " It seems okay for this style of writing.

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  • mosja boardcasted 1.
  • broadcasted 2.
  • " It seems okay for this style of writing.
  • 3.
  • After a colon (:), use semi-colons (;) between elements of a series --instead of commas.
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mosjaboardcasted

1. broadcasted

2. The second example is better, in my opinion, because you took out "which were" to make it more simple, and it eliminated an unnecessary extra "were." It seems okay for this style of writing.

3. After a colon (:), use semi-colons (;) between elements of a series --instead of commas. * It's not clear if the com

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mosjaboardcasted

broadcast would be sufficient.

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