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0 Buying smuggled goods is a form of support for smugglers. Buying pirated cassette tapes and Cds, and even copying computer software programmes are also legally wrong. What are your views on such and other forms of indirect illegal acts? 02br
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00 Once walking around some squares in Hong Kong, you would discover a mass of smugglers displayed everywhere. They keep on promoting their smuggled goods like pirated cassette tapes, Cds, computer software programmes etc. How do you feel about this environment? Would you be their consumer? Most of you may answer ‘yes’ but reversed in fact. To reject the smugglers is a common sense for all of you. However, think of it deeply, can you pay the price of the real product? 02br
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00 If your answer is ‘yes’, congratulation, you can do what you say and it is suit to moral. But for the others, who cannot afford the price, may still buy those goods. 02br
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00 Clearly, all brand-name goods, original Cds and computer software programmes have their copyrights to protect the publishers and companies from loss. And it is also a sense that to respect all the constructors and their products. So generally, we all used to reject the smuggled goods so that we can achieve our responsibilities of citizen. 02br
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00 However, for a normal people, monthly salary is below averaged, they also need relaxation. Listening Music, watching movie, and using computer are their daily life. But just as I mentioned, their income is not enough for enjoying those entertainment with real products. If you were them, how can you fulfill your desire? Certainly, you have no choice to buy smuggled goods. 02br
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00 Moreover, smuggled goods have their selling points. Owing to information age, smugglers also make use of IT technology on their products. They use CD rewriter to copy all kinds of CDs which have high quality as good as the real one. For a consumer, buying smuggled goods would have no loss and in a cheaper value. Furthermore, the fake goods like bags, shoes and wearing are usually made with high quality materials, this is also the reason why many people are still using them. Those goods can be last longer and be washed several times without losing colors. 02br
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00 What’s more, people used to stay at home and seek all the information they needed due to computer. They can use the searching engine in the internet such as Winmx and Karaa to find their favorite music, video and movie. Some of these are still unreleased, so many people like to enjoy the early show on the internet. And owing to the high downloading speed, a song normally can be gotten within one minute, that’s why they enjoy this fast network but unlikely to buy original products. 02br
00 After all, buying smuggled goods is acceptable. Although it is illegal acts, we can see many benefits of it like the better materials, lower price and several choices for us that can fulfill our desires. Moreover, in this information age, using copying goods in computer is very common although it is illegal, because it is more comfortable and higher efficient. It is thus using smuggled goods is suitable for our life. 0-