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Hamadresh Posted 13 years ago
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any other format to make this sentance more powerfull

It is rather difficult to understand why i didn't get the payment yet, i wonder if you chase up your bank, otherwise i will consider to ask for a cheaque.
  

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No offence but I wouldn't take your advice when you can't even capitalise your 'I's; a proper noun. Also, I think you need some full stops where you have commas instead, m'dear.

— Anonymous

  • No offence but I wouldn't take your advice when you can't even capitalise your 'I's; a proper noun.
  • Also, I think you need some full stops where you have commas instead, m'dear.
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No offence but I wouldn't take your advice when you can't even capitalise your 'I's; a proper noun. Also, I think you need some full stops where you have commas instead, m'dear.
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You are correct I should use capital letter when I begin ,Thank you
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Those who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones Mr. I can't spell offense. - Just a thought
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Mr Anonymous - offense is American while offence is British. I think we have to be open-minded in the varieties of English.
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With a few tweaks, you could say : It is rather difficult to understand why I haven't received payment yet. I wonder if you could chase your bank? Otherwise I will consider asking for a cheque.
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I would say, "I'm not sure why I haven't received payment yet: would you be so kind as to check with your bank or send me a check?" That's how I would phrase it if I were to politely ask.
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where do we use rather in English
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