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Hamadresh Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
any one correct this letter
Despite your busy schedules, I have been sincerely looking forward to receiving your response.I am writing to follow up on my last email on the 10 Aug2015 with their attachment. As you requested and further corresponded on the 10 Sep2015 enclosed with copy of my all passports with regards my amended date of birth on my Certificate of Naturalisation.
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This is somewhat confusing. hamadresh As you requested and further corresponded on the 10 Sep2015 enclosed with copy of my all passports with regards my amended date of birth on my Certificate of Naturalisation. Rewrite it using simpler language and more than one sentence if necessary.
- This is somewhat confusing.
- hamadresh As you requested and further corresponded on the 10 Sep2015 enclosed with copy of my all passports with regards my amended date of birth on my Certificate of Naturalisation.
- Rewrite it using simpler language and more than one sentence if necessary.
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This is somewhat confusing.
hamadreshAs you requested and further corresponded on the 10 Sep2015 enclosed with copy of my all passports with regards my amended date of birth on my Certificate of Naturalisation.Rewrite it using simpler language and more than one sentence if necessary.
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This email is very formal to my MP , I wonder how do I splinted to , 3 or more dents fed as you advised
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hamadreshdents fedI don't know what this means. I repeat that you should rewrite the text in simpler clearer language, so we can at least understand it. Don't worry too much about the formality at this stage; we can take care of that.
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"more than one sentence if necessary" = "3 or more dents fed as you advised"
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hamadresh, I understand that you emailed them on 10 Aug. Please let me ask you...
Did they write back to you, that same day, asking for more documents, and now you will send those additional documents with this email? If yes, use this:
< Good day!
I am writing to follow up on my last email (and its accompanying attachments), dated 10 Aug, 2015. Per your request whe
Did they write back to you, that same day, asking for more documents, and now you will send those additional documents with this email? If yes, use this:
< Good day!
I am writing to follow up on my last email (and its accompanying attachments), dated 10 Aug, 2015. Per your request whe
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can anyone can help me to resolve this email to my MP
Dear Kerin Buck
I am writing to follow up on my last email Sep2015 with regards my amended date of birth with my Certificate of Naturalisation.
moreover, I have sent you all the documents as requested on the 10Aug2015.
I have sincerely looking forward to hear from you and find out the result.
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Dear Kerin Buck
I am writing to follow up on my last email Sep2015 with regards my amended date of birth with my Certificate of Naturalisation.
moreover, I have sent you all the documents as requested on the 10Aug2015.
I have sincerely looking forward to hear from you and find out the result.
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Dear Mr. Buck,
I am writing to follow up on my last email in September regarding my amended date of birth on my certificate of naturalization.
I sent you all the documents as requested on August 10th, and I am looking forward to hearing from you on the result. If you have any further queries or concerns, please contact me.
Yours sincerely,
I am writing to follow up on my last email in September regarding my amended date of birth on my certificate of naturalization.
I sent you all the documents as requested on August 10th, and I am looking forward to hearing from you on the result. If you have any further queries or concerns, please contact me.
Yours sincerely,
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