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Please correct my sentence:"I think abc team should be allowed inside accessing in data center! If not, so how can they manage all maintenance activates without accessing the data center and why we have not received any complain after installing the security access control device. Kindly keep consciousness all the activities in data center for in future and avoid unexpected happens. Also add their duties timings."Thanks,MA

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

Please correct my sentence:

"I think abc team should be allowed inside accessing in data center! If not, so how can they manage all maintenance activates without accessing the data center and why we have not received any complain after installing the security access control device. Kindly keep consciousness all the activities in data center for in future and avoid unexpected happens. Also add their duties timings."

I had trouble understanding your meaning. Perhaps this?

"I think the ABC team should be allowed inside the data center! If not, how can they perform all the maintenance activities? Why have we not received any complaint after installing the security access control device? Kindly stay aware of all future activities in the data center, and avoid unexpected events. Also add their duties timings."

I don't understand the last sentence at all.

Best wishes, Clive

Ahmedm · Answer

Hi Clive,

Thanks for the correction and my last sentence belongs to the excel sheet which was I received.

Regards,

MA

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