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Pearlseed Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Any of your opinions? in 'From the research, there came something:'
"From the above research method and findings, there came the following conclusion:
There was some relationship between mental health and sports socialization of daily sports welfare facilities participants."
Including the sentence, "From the above research method and findings, there came the following conclusion:," the writing on the top is what I put down for someone who came to me.
On the other hand, I said to myself, "How rather something to be desired mine leaves! Doesn't it have something awkward in it?"
Prior to it, I had considered the following three options such as:
(1) On the basis of the above research method and findings, a conclusion was drawn out as follows:
(2) Based on the above research method and findings, there came the following conclusion:
(3) Out of the above research method and findings, there came the following conclusion:
(4) From the above research method and findings, there came the following conclusion:
Now what question I have is, what do you think each item above has its own way of slips?
I would very much appreciate it if you would kindly explain to me what your opinions should like to be.
Thanks in advance.
For a better world,
Pearl Seed
There was some relationship between mental health and sports socialization of daily sports welfare facilities participants."
Including the sentence, "From the above research method and findings, there came the following conclusion:," the writing on the top is what I put down for someone who came to me.
On the other hand, I said to myself, "How rather something to be desired mine leaves! Doesn't it have something awkward in it?"
Prior to it, I had considered the following three options such as:
(1) On the basis of the above research method and findings, a conclusion was drawn out as follows:
(2) Based on the above research method and findings, there came the following conclusion:
(3) Out of the above research method and findings, there came the following conclusion:
(4) From the above research method and findings, there came the following conclusion:
Now what question I have is, what do you think each item above has its own way of slips?
I would very much appreciate it if you would kindly explain to me what your opinions should like to be.
Thanks in advance.
For a better world,
Pearl Seed
Top answer
Hi, native speaker here. While I agree with you the the original is a little awkward, most scientific writing is a little awkward and likely won't stand out as out of place. My view of each of the other options 1) "on the basis of" is a little wordy and pompous but also sounds "cool," I like it personally but wouldn't use it in a paper.
- Hi, native speaker here.
- While I agree with you the the original is a little awkward, most scientific writing is a little awkward and likely won't stand out as out of place.
- My view of each of the other options 1) "on the basis of" is a little wordy and pompous but also sounds "cool," I like it personally but wouldn't use it in a paper.
- "A conclusion was drawn out as follows" is quite clunky, I prefer the other options.
- 2) I actually prefer this one to the original one, the "based on" is less awkward than "from the above" 3) "Out of ...
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Hi, native speaker here. While I agree with you the the original is a little awkward, most scientific writing is a little awkward and likely won't stand out as out of place.
My view of each of the other options
1) "on the basis of" is a little wordy and pompous but also sounds "cool," I like it personally but wouldn't use it in a paper. "A conclusion was drawn out as follows" is quit
My view of each of the other options
1) "on the basis of" is a little wordy and pompous but also sounds "cool," I like it personally but wouldn't use it in a paper. "A conclusion was drawn out as follows" is quit
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Hi,
"From the above research method and findings, there came the following conclusion:
There was some relationship between mental health and sports socialization of daily sports welfare facilities participants."
Here are a few comments on the second part of the sentence.
sports socialization This phrase does not have a clear meaning to me.
"From the above research method and findings, there came the following conclusion:
There was some relationship between mental health and sports socialization of daily sports welfare facilities participants."
Here are a few comments on the second part of the sentence.
sports socialization This phrase does not have a clear meaning to me.
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Dear Anonymous,
How elaborate you are! bits of your opinion are being welcome and are being tasted.
I like what expression you suggested, ‘This study found the following conclusion’
Wishing for you Happy New Year,
Pear Seed
How elaborate you are! bits of your opinion are being welcome and are being tasted.
I like what expression you suggested, ‘This study found the following conclusion’
Wishing for you Happy New Year,
Pear Seed
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Clive,
How intuitive you are!
Yours quite helped.
"welfare facilities In modern English, this tends to suggest 'charitable facilities for the needy'. Do you perhaps mean 'recreational facilities'?"
Yes, what you guessed is exact or quiet closer to the word of what it really meant, for:
Speaking of what I wrote, it
How intuitive you are!
Yours quite helped.
"welfare facilities In modern English, this tends to suggest 'charitable facilities for the needy'. Do you perhaps mean 'recreational facilities'?"
Yes, what you guessed is exact or quiet closer to the word of what it really meant, for:
Speaking of what I wrote, it
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Clive (and others who may likewise read),
for your information, the whole of the antecedent sentences introduced previously is the following a skip farther below:
Blessing and have a nice day,
Pearl Seed
The Relationship between Middle-aged Women’s Mental Health and Sports Socialization in their Participation in Welfare Facilities’ Daily Sports Programs
for your information, the whole of the antecedent sentences introduced previously is the following a skip farther below:
Blessing and have a nice day,
Pearl Seed
The Relationship between Middle-aged Women’s Mental Health and Sports Socialization in their Participation in Welfare Facilities’ Daily Sports Programs
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