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Kennylombo Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Any mistakes in this?

Seeking to obtain a position within an organization to deliver the best performance for enhancing the production and profit of the company, while utilizing my knowledge in business commerce to accomplish goals. An individual who enjoys a team environment but also demonstrates success in individual tasks; dedicated, dependable, and a natural leader with exceptional communication skills.
  

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There are no sentences in your writing.
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There are two sentences.
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Neither of your 'sentences' is complete.
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There are two fragments, and no sentences.
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kennylomboSeeking to obtain a position
Change the first word to 'I seek', and you have a sentence.
kennylombo An individual who
Begin with 'I am an individual who' and you have a sentence.
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AlpheccaStarsThere are two fragments, and no sentences.
Fragments would be fine if you make them into bullet points on a list of your qualifications and talents.
As a paragraph, it just does not look very professional.
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