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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Any mistakes here, please?

Hello!

Could you please, check if there are mistakes in the following?

" I am honored to be with you today at your commencement. Congratulations! Hope you keep on persevering on your dreams, for more troublesome the way can be. Luck, success and self-confidence always, and that this course has contributed to enrich your career and mainly your being.

Thank you all very much."

Thank you for the help,
Aislan



  

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"I am honored to be with you today at your commencement. Congratulations! I hope you persevere on the road to achieving your dreams, for very troublesome the way can be.

  • "I am honored to be with you today at your commencement.
  • Congratulations!
  • I hope you persevere on the road to achieving your dreams, for very troublesome the way can be.
  • Luck, success and self-confidence -- all are needed .
  • I hope that this course has contributed to the enrichment of your career and to your general well-being .
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"I am honored to be with you today at your commencement. Congratulations! I hope you persevere on the road to achieving your dreams, for very troublesome the way can be. Luck, success and self-confidence-- all are needed. I hope that this course has contributed to the enrichment of your career and to your general well-being.

Thank you all
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Hello Mister Micawber,

Many thanks for helping me.

Best wishes,
Aislan

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