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Masanori Takaoka Posted 9 years ago
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1 Many experts say that dressing well and taking lessons that teaches confidence can help the student get a job with both status and high salary.

2 In the discussion Barbara said, "Since we live in a money-oriented society, the average individual cares little about solving anyone's else problems."
  

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A couple of mistakes highlighted: 1 Many experts say that dressing well and taking lessons that teaches confidence can help the student get a job with both status and high salary . "

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A couple of mistakes highlighted:

1 Many experts say that dressing well and taking lessons that teaches confidence can help the student get a job with both status and high salary.

2 In the discussion Barbara said, "Since we live in a money-oriented society, the average individual cares l
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GPYA couple of mistakes highlighted:1 Many experts say that dressing well and taking lessons that teaches confidence can help the student get a job with both status and high salary.2 In the discussion Barbara said, "Since we live in a money-oriented society, the average individual cares little about solving anyone's else problems."
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1. Yes for teach or give (but the meaning is not necessarily exactly the same).

"both high status and salary" isn't quite right. I had in mind "both status and a high salary".

2. Yes, but you can also say "anyone else's". In that sentence I tend to prefer the latter.

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