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Masanori Takaoka Posted 10 years ago
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"My Favorite Place"
I like the cafe. I often study or talk with friends there. Though the cafe is in Tokyo, where a lot of people are every day, there are a few people in the cafe. Therefore, the cafe is so quiet that I can feel comfortable. In addition, the sweets which the cafe serves are so good. Especially I like chocolate cookies. Considering these good aspects, the cafe is my most favorite place.
  

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My Favorite Place I like the cafe. I often study or talk with friends there. Though the cafe is in Tokyo, where a lot of people are every day, there are a few people in the cafe.

  • My Favorite Place I like the cafe.
  • I often study or talk with friends there.
  • Though the cafe is in Tokyo, where a lot of people are every day, there are a few people in the cafe.
  • Therefore, the cafe is so quiet that I can feel comfortable.
  • In addition, the sweets which the cafe serves are so good.
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My Favorite Place

I like the cafe. I often study or talk with friends there. Though the cafe is in Tokyo, where a lot of people are every day, there are a few people

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