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Ayan86 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Any mistakes?

Hi! Are there any rammatical mistakes here (especially in the underlined parts)?

If the test has been completed successfully, the association shall ensure an automatic execution of a certificate and a possibility for the client to print the certificate at time and place most convenient for him or her.

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If the test has been completed successfully, the association shall ensure the automatic execution of a certificate and a possibility for the client to print the certificate at the time and place most convenient for him or he r. 'Execution' does not seem a suitable word here. How about 'production'?

— Clive

  • If the test has been completed successfully, the association shall ensure the automatic execution of a certificate and a possibility for the client to print the certificate at the time and place most convenient for him or he r.
  • 'Execution' does not seem a suitable word here.
  • How about 'production'?
  • To me, better wording is this.
  • If the test has been completed successfully, the association shall ensure the production of a certificate that the client can print at his or her convenience
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If the test has been completed successfully, the association shall ensure the automatic execution of a certificate and a possibility for the client to print the certificate at the time and place most convenient for him or her.

'Execution' does not seem a suitable word here. How about 'production'?

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