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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Are there any gramatical mistakes in here?

On August 18 I went to the defendant and, upon entering the apartment, realized that a number of other persons, not only Jane Smith and our child, are present in there.

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On August 18 I went to the defendant's apartment and discovered that a number of other persons besides Jane Smith and our child were present there.

  • On August 18 I went to the defendant's apartment and discovered that a number of other persons besides Jane Smith and our child were present there.
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On August 18 I went to the defendant's apartment and discovered that a number of other persons besides Jane Smith and our child were present there.

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