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Frod Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Any Mistakes?

Can you see any mistakes in the following two sentencees:
We have a lot of devices that make our life easier. One of them is a computer.
  

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frod Can you see any mistakes in the following two sentencees: The first mistake is that they should probably be one sentence: We have many devices that make our life easier, one of which is the computer.

— Mister Micawber

  • frod Can you see any mistakes in the following two sentencees: The first mistake is that they should probably be one sentence: We have many devices that make our life easier, one of which is the computer.
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frodCan you see any mistakes in the following two sentencees:
The first mistake is that they should probably be one sentence:

We have many devices that make our life easier, one of which is the computer.
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Thank you, Mr Micawber.
Are which and a absotutely inappropriate?
We have many devices which make our life easier, one of which is a computer.
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The two 'which's are very awkward: they are poor style. 'A' is wrong because you are talking about the generic device, not an individual one.
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