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Masanori Takaoka Posted 10 years ago
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John Wood, whose position was Microsoft executive wondered if his job was important and quit the job to start an NPO with a friend, who later built schools and established libraries to give children an opportunity to read books.
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John Wood, whose position was Microsoft executive wondered if his job was important and quit the job to start an NPO with a friend, who later built schools and established libraries to give children an opportunity to read books. You need a comma after 'executive'. It would also be good not to repeat 'job'.
- John Wood, whose position was Microsoft executive wondered if his job was important and quit the job to start an NPO with a friend, who later built schools and established libraries to give children an opportunity to read books.
- You need a comma after 'executive'.
- It would also be good not to repeat 'job'.
- You need to clarify if it was Wood or his friend who built schools etc.
- I suggest this.
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John Wood, whose position was Microsoft executive wondered if his job was important and quit the job to start an NPO with a friend, who later built schools and established libraries to give children an opportunity to read books.
You need a comma after 'executive'.
It would also be good not to repeat 'job'.
You need a comma after 'executive'.
It would also be good not to repeat 'job'.
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