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Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud, and how does it relate to the person you are?
Most of the times, a society do not accept which is unusual and is never done by someone before. Same thing happened with me also. I am an Indian girl who used to live in the society where people thinks that girls are not suppose to do higher studies. My society had never accepted my goal of becoming a doctor. I still remembered that day when I told my uncle that I want to become a doctor. My uncle got so angry and told me that my dream will never turn into a reality. I was so hurt to know that my own uncle was not on my side, but that was just a start. My own parents told me that I should give up on my dream and choose some other career in which I can get my degree in a short period. I was all alone and felt so helpless, but I decided not to give up on my dream of becoming a successful doctor. Once again, I got up and tried to convince my parents that I would never let them down and will become a doctor one day. I got success in convincing them and now it is my turn to show them that I can live up to their expectations and will never break the promise of becoming a good doctor. I still used to get lot of criticism from my other family members, but now I had already learned about how to take the criticism in a healthy way. Now whenever they criticize me, I felt more thirst of showing them that they are wrong and I can get what I want from my life. I want to show all of them that dreams do come true. Now I understood that why James Matthew Barrie once said "Dreams do come true, if we only wish hard enough. You can have anything in life if you will sacrifice everything else for it." I also sacrificed most important thing of my life, love and compassion of most of my family members toward me, to accomplish my dream.
According to me, losing to ourselves or giving up our dream which we cherish throughout our whole life is always more painful than losing to someone else. So, I decided not to lose to myself or to give up my own dreams. That is why I felt so proud of myself now that I did not listen to my society and never thought of quitting my studies whereas other girls of my age already did so in my society. I am proud that I stand up for my rights. I am proud that I am showing to my society that girls can do higher studies.
These are some of my qualities which make me different from my society. I am determined and I am proud of being what I am. I will never lose to anyone and will always get whatever I want with my own hard work. That is the way I am.