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Lisalee Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

any inapropriate words in my sentence?

Group Chairman Ni Hanming said:" The jewelry industry of MKH.Group targets at the high-end market. Apart from its own development, MKH.Group dedicates in promoting the jewelry culture. Lu Ruihua said that many reform policies in Shenzhen during his term were implemented and achieved by Chairman Ni and other outstanding examples. The booming development of Shenzhen culture industry benefits by those excellent private entrepreneurs, and that's why Baoan district greatly embodied the effectiveness of the reform policies. Lu Ruihua hopes Chairman Ni keep setting himself an example to others, promoting the development of the jewelry culture and devoting more to Shenzhen cultural undertakings in the future.
  

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Group Chairman Ni Hanming sai d: "T he jewelry industry of MK H G roup targets at the high-end market. You need to get the spacing right around the punctuation. There's always a space after a colon, and no space between the opening quote and the start of the sentence being quoted.

  • Group Chairman Ni Hanming sai d: "T he jewelry industry of MK H G roup targets at the high-end market.
  • You need to get the spacing right around the punctuation.
  • There's always a space after a colon, and no space between the opening quote and the start of the sentence being quoted.
  • Group .
  • There's supposed to be a space after a period.
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Group Chairman Ni Hanming said: "The jewelry industry of MKH Group targets at the high-end market.

You need to get the spacing right around the punctuation. There's always a space after a colon, and no space between the opening quote and the start of the sentence being quoted.
You shouldn't write MKH.Group. There's supposed to be a space after a period.
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thank you very much,it really helps.

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