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Ayan86 Posted 11 years ago
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Any improvements necessary?
Hi!
Any improvements necessary here?
Our offer includes several recreational and entertainment options, binoculars for observation of the surrounding territory and birds, rental of canoes, events and hikes through the swamp, delicious picnic with fishes from Lake Guzzo and accommodations.
Any improvements necessary here?
Our offer includes several recreational and entertainment options, binoculars for observation of the surrounding territory and birds, rental of canoes, events and hikes through the swamp, delicious picnic with fishes from Lake Guzzo and accommodations.
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'Offer' is probably the wrong word. What do you mean? I corrected your use of 'fishes' long ago.
- 'Offer' is probably the wrong word.
- What do you mean?
- I corrected your use of 'fishes' long ago.
- Have you not learned yet?
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'Offer' is probably the wrong word. What do you mean?
I corrected your use of 'fishes' long ago. Have you not learned yet?
I corrected your use of 'fishes' long ago. Have you not learned yet?
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Our offering includes several recreational and entertainment options, binoculars for observation of the surrounding territory and birds, rental of canoes, events and hikes through the swamp, delicious picnic with fish from Lake Guzzo and accommodations.
Our offering includes several recreational and entertainment options, binoculars for observation of the surrounding territory and birds, rental of canoes, events and hikes through the swamp, delicious picnic with fish from Lake Guzzo and accommodations.
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