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Odessa Dawn Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Any improvement

We want you to know how much we appreciate your really showing a very caring perspective of us (when no one else does). We are very pleased with your better understanding (=compassion) and genuine concern for people around you.

Your exceptional personality makes us feel special. Your unique personality makes the best of situation. You always live up to high moral values. Those admirable traits are rare breed in our society (unfortunately). We are very much like to obtain them.

Although there is no so much to be gained than ameliorate our wellbeing. This world is a better place with much more kind hearted and generous people the like of YOU. Please accept our sincere thanks.

Would you please improve this text?
  

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It's very difficult to follow that text. Try to rewrite it in a simpler and clearer way; if you can, be more specific.

  • It's very difficult to follow that text.
  • Try to rewrite it in a simpler and clearer way; if you can, be more specific.
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It's very difficult to follow that text. Try to rewrite it in a simpler and clearer way; if you can, be more specific.
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Hi Teechr. How is it now?

We want to let know how much we appreciate your showing us a very caring attitude (when no one else does). We are very pleased with your better understanding (=compassion) and genuine concern toward us.

Your exceptional personality makes us feel special. And your unique personality makes the best of situation. You always live up to high moral values th
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Odessa DawnHi Teechr. How is it now?
It's slightly better, but in future, please be more specific.
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We want to let know how much we appreciate your showing us a very caring attitude. (when no one else does).
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Who are you writing to?
eg a good friend? eg a teacher?
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Hi Clive.

Neither. I do not have friends yet. I am writing that letter to someone always offers help.

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