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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Any grammatical mistakes here?

Hi!

Do you spot any grammatical mistakes here? Should I improve something?

Furthermore, she stated that she has received an invitation from the competent British authorities to visit England in order to get to know her granddaughter better and to provide the necessary answers.

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" You'll find no change in your meaning, and your readers will thank you for saving them two words.

  • " You'll find no change in your meaning, and your readers will thank you for saving them two words.
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"she had received"

Every time you're tempted to use the phrase "in order to," drop the words "in order." You'll find no change in your meaning, and your readers will thank you for saving them two words.

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