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Masanori Takaoka Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Any grammatical errors?

Any grammatical errors in (1) and (2)?

(1) It is the responsibility of parents to grow up their children before they enter school, at which time the children start to become more and more influenced by their friends.

(2) With this new source of financial support, scientists will be devoted to their research a greater amount of time and effort to understand the basic mechanisms of cell growth.
  

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(1) It is the sole responsibility of parents to raise their children until they enter school, at which time the children are influenced more and more by their friends. (2) With this new source of financial support, scientists will devote more time and effort to their research into the basic mechanisms of cell growth.

— Mister Micawber

  • (1) It is the sole responsibility of parents to raise their children until they enter school, at which time the children are influenced more and more by their friends.
  • (2) With this new source of financial support, scientists will devote more time and effort to their research into the basic mechanisms of cell growth.
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(1) It is the sole responsibility of parents to raise their children until they enter school, at which time the children are influenced more and more by their friends.

(2) With this new source of financial support, scientists will devote more time and effort to their research into the basic mechanisms of cell growth.
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