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Haha1 Posted 14 years ago
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Any grammar mistakes? Please can you fix my mistakes!!

many Korean want to get a job like a public official that they can work permanently. It means that people can feel uncomfortable and anxiety if their leaders are not doing work with responsibility because they judge that they cannot do work continually.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas. Please fix them and post your revised text here: many Korean want to get a permanent job like a public official that they can work permanently . It means that people can feel uncomfortable and anxiety if their leaders are not doing work with responsibility because they judge that they cannot do work continually .

  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please fix them and post your revised text here: many Korean want to get a permanent job like a public official that they can work permanently .
  • It means that people can feel uncomfortable and anxiety if their leaders are not doing work with responsibility because they judge that they cannot do work continually .
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please fix them and post your revised text here:

many Korean want to get a permanent job like a public official that they can work permanently. It means that people can feel uncomfortable and anxiety if their leaders are not doing work with responsibility because they judge that they cannot
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Thank you for telling me what I did wrong! You are such an awesome teacher! I fixed my writing. Do you think this sounds okay!? Emotion: smile
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Many Koreans want to get a permanent job like a public official because people cannot feel comfortable or satisfied if their leaders are not doing their work responsibly. People will eventually think they cannot keep their jobs.
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Mister Micawber! Thank you so much! You are my best teacher!

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