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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Any grammar mistakes?

Hi!

Do you spot any grammar mistakes?

For the third year our televizion organizes a campaign for the sales of advertizing time slots, allowing you to acquire an advertizing time slot with at lest 36% discount, or, in other words, almost twice as much commercials with the same budget.

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For the third year our television station is organizing a campaign for the sale of commercial air time, allowing you to acquire a time slot for at least a 36% discount. ( X ) or, in other words, almost twice as much commercials with the same budget . — I don't understand the meaning of this part, so I cannot fix it.

  • For the third year our television station is organizing a campaign for the sale of commercial air time, allowing you to acquire a time slot for at least a 36% discount.
  • ( X ) or, in other words, almost twice as much commercials with the same budget .
  • — I don't understand the meaning of this part, so I cannot fix it.
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For the third year our television station is organizing a campaign for the sale of commercial air time, allowing you to acquire a time slot for at least a 36% discount.

(X) or, in other words, almost twice as much commercials with the same budget. — I don't understand the meaning of this part, so I cannot fix it.

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